Would this work? (text)

skullllll · 2018-10-12T02:09:48+00:00

It's too dry. You gotta paint that zoo visit as something fun. Like, why are you going to the zoo, what's your favourite thing in there? Go from there.

And end with something like "you should totally come".

CainPrice · 2018-10-12T03:50:22+00:00

Who's the girl? What's the situation?

"They're feeding the lions at the zoo at 4:30 this Saturday. Come with me. We'll get ice cream afterward if watching a lion eat an entire deer makes you hungry."

"I want to hold hands and make faces at the monkeys. Meet me at the zoo at 4:30 Saturday?"

"Want to try to teach the zoo parrots swear words? I'm going at 4:30 on Saturday. You should come."

"The zoo is the best place for people watching. Let's make out on a bench and give the people something to watch. 4:30 Saturday?"

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Title	Would this work? (text)
Author	wellhellothere45
Upvotes	1
Comments	2
Date	October 12, 2018 1:56 AM UTC (7 years ago)
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